Loren Kantor
Jan 21, 2025

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Beautiful and heartbreaking. Your writing adopts the earnest tone of a young boy, unsure what's happening but eager to please his mom who's going through her own emotional trauma. I feel for both your parents, even your abusive dad who's about to abandon his responsibility to your family. I feel empathy for you as a boy, cheering as you do your part to rescue your family. Wonderful writing.

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Loren Kantor
Loren Kantor

Written by Loren Kantor

Loren is a writer and woodcut artist based in Los Angeles. He teaches printmaking and creative writing to kids and adults.

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